Such a poignant and striking poem; it moved me to tears. Your poems feel like a call to live more deeply and "come into presence". They wake me up!
This one made me feel bit sad because I realize I'm just not as present as I could be. What have I failed to witness when my pair of eyes was uniquely there to witness a unique thing?
Sometimes it can feel like I am the one doing the task, seeing the site, perceiving a moment. It is me over here and the world over there... but this poem reminds me that the world beyond myself seeks ~me~ it "longs" and "wants" me to witness it. As I perceive the world, it also asks me to look :")
I'll see your occasional frightening indecision on waking and raise you one occasional realization that I'm not hot stuff. :) Love your poetry, Kimbra.
beautiful
Unique✨
Thank you so much for this 🖤
Such a poignant and striking poem; it moved me to tears. Your poems feel like a call to live more deeply and "come into presence". They wake me up!
This one made me feel bit sad because I realize I'm just not as present as I could be. What have I failed to witness when my pair of eyes was uniquely there to witness a unique thing?
Sometimes it can feel like I am the one doing the task, seeing the site, perceiving a moment. It is me over here and the world over there... but this poem reminds me that the world beyond myself seeks ~me~ it "longs" and "wants" me to witness it. As I perceive the world, it also asks me to look :")
Exactly! You nailed it. It's that perspective change that can change everything. Thank you so much for these kind words on my poems.
So moving! Such a beautiful painting x
Aw thanks Maddie!
lived a
whole life
like that; It
was/is neat!
I'll see your occasional frightening indecision on waking and raise you one occasional realization that I'm not hot stuff. :) Love your poetry, Kimbra.
Your poetry is astounding.
not being a " english " person ... a suppose what you are communicating through the poem is ; to be aware of the magic in the world . . .🌞🧡.....
Powerful.. igniting feelings ..and thoughts.... images. thank you.
KIMBRA❣️❣️❣️